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"I cast a spell on you"

Welcome to my critique thread!

This critique will be open to senior artists

through to master

 

My critiques

(Disclaimer: Everything said in the critique is my own

opinion so please do not think I am being harsh in any

way especially if you may not agree with my comments).

 

Usually I start out with saying which graphics in

your gallery I love before moving on to each

section of your gallery. Here I will list both your

strong and weak areas, often giving tips on how

you can improve in those selected areas.

 

At the end of the critique I may give you a mini

challenge to get you out of your comfort zone and

to test you.

 

If you have specific weaknesses that you are aware

of then I will try my best to help you and guide you

in the right direction.

 

Rules

1) Fill out the form below

2) Please give me a couple of days to get round to your critique

(trouble of being a uni student)

3) I can only take 3 people at a time so if you see (3/3) in the description

or three people have posted and I have not commented that they

are completed then you know it is full, so please do not comment

 

 

[b]Artist Name[/b]:
[b]Acknowledged Weak Points[/b]: (i.e., 'blending')
[b]Type of Critique Requested[/b]: (i.e., 'my banners always come out cluttered - how can i prevent that from happening?')
[b]Software[/b]: (Photoshop, Paint Shop Pro, etc...)
[b]Most Recent Gallery Update[/b]: (i.e., date)
[b]Gallery Link[/b]: [url=LINKHERE]Gallery[/url]
[b]Requested Time Frame[/b]:

 

Edited by bewitching.

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Artist Name: bright spark / Zoë

Acknowledged Weak Points: text visibility, variation in composition, style

Type of Critique Requested: I don't have much time for lots and lots of graphics making at the moment, so I'd like to know what the key areas are that I need to work on!

Software: Photoshop

Most Recent Gallery Update: 15th January

Gallery Link: +clicky

Requested Time Frame: obviously when you have time ❤️

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Artist Name: Ronnie

Acknowledge Weak Points: Repetitive comp, especially on signatures; maybe text, especially with sizing/placement/quality (sometimes looks pixelated?)

Type of Critique Requested: Whatever works for you, but maybe suggest a few things I should clean out?

Software: Photoshop

Most Recent Gallery Update: January 19, 2019

Gallery Link: Here!

Requested Time Frame: Whenever is best for you. Thank you so much for doing this! ❤️ 

Edited by sherlock

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[b]Artist Name[/b]: Amortentia1992
[b]Acknowledged Weak Points[/b]: (i.e., 'blending') Tex, focal point
[b]Type of Critique Requested[/b]: (i.e., 'my banners always come out cluttered - how can i prevent that from happening?') general critique. 
I'm looking to develop a style...
[b]Software[/b]: (Photoshop, Paint Shop Pro, etc...) Phoroshop CC
[b]Most Recent Gallery Update[/b]: Jabuary 13, 2019
[b]Gallery Link[/b]: Gallery
[b]Requested Time Frame[/b]:whenever you can get to it
Edited by Amortentia1992

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Artist Name: ShadowRose | Taylor

Acknowledge Weak Points: repetitive comp, image quality, chapter images as an entire concept lol

Type of Critique Requested: honestly, hit me with whatever you've got. weakest graphics, things to focus on going forward, tips for developing my style (it's inconsistent at best atm), etc. etc.

Software: PS CC

Most Recent Gallery Update: 14 january

Gallery Link: +here

Requested Time Frame: no rush!! thanks for offering this! :loves: 

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Artist Name: living proof. / Jess

Acknowledge Weak Points: I honestly couldn't say right now, if anything I believe it's my repetive text and composition 

Type of Critique Requested: graphic wise, I'm lost. I don't know where to go next, so anything would be helpful.

Software: PS CS6

Most Recent Gallery Update: JANUARY 14

Gallery Link: [url=https://the-dark-arts.org/forums/index.php?/topic/138020-skinny-dipping-in-my-jeans/]here[/url]

Requested Time Frame: Whenever you get around to it is fine with me.

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